Today my class and I are doing a free read and the poem I chose is a book named Treasures from the Sea. It’s about how shells look and feel. I think the message is about how wonderful shells are. I would give the poem a 5 out of 5 because I really like the poem and I like shell too.
(The poem Sharp-shaped spiral shell, looking like a stairway slippery castle top,
sea-worn and smooth, little round univalve, shaped like hovercraft,
small ridged shells struck on sparkling sand.
How long have you been here on Ohope beach? What were you doing before I picked you up?
Why are you shaped like that?)
by john Okeroa.
Kia ora Noah,
I really like how you have all your punctuation like commas full stops and even question marks.
The story sounds very interesting, it sound like one I read the other day but its not.
from Tawhi from Belfast school.